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Post by giselle on Dec 12, 2010 17:03:08 GMT -5
NOW WHO'S THE GREATER SIN; OOC INFO – Name: Andrea Age: 15 Years of Experience: Five and a half, approx. Other Characters on RS: No.
TELL ME DARLING, WHERE DO WE BEGIN; CHARACTER BASICS – Full Name: Giselle Nicknames: Gis, Manipulative, Mani Age: Three years Gender: Female Breed: Transylvanian wolf. Sub-species: None. Hybrid: No.
YOUR DRAB EYES SEEM TO INVITE; CHARACTER LOOKS – Height: Five feet, six inches. Weight: 184 lbs. Voice: -- Eye Color: Toxic green. Fur: The base of it is black, decorated ever so sweetly with mildly noticeable stripes of a dusty-green brown. The same black remains dominant until it reaches the base of her front legs. There, the paws' color is a snow white hue. Scars and Markings:
-Scars: One thick, long scar on the base of her neck.
-Markings: Dusty brown, somewhat noticeable stripes. White front paws.
Diseases: No.
LIKE THE DEVIL'S GOT YOUR HAND; ABOUT THE CHARACTER – Personality: It's within her nature to be manipulative at times. She is dominant, she thinks high of herself and will beat any competition down to size. However, she can and will be gentle, and even respectful, if the other party is willing to give out the respect that is required. Giselle is almost insane; Telepathy got the best out of her, the rumble of constant voices left her own mind uncovered for foreign attacks and reading. Paranoid and vulnerable, she dragged herself to her own, personal throne. When, and if she's part of a pack, she's pretty quiet. She holds back from snapping and insulting with a nearly unbreakable silence. She does talk, if she finds someone interesting enough for her to talk to. She finds pack life amusing by itself.
History: Young Giselle was a case out of quite a long lineage of telepathic origins. The rejection of others was known before words were shared; A tyke like her was easily left out. And so she avoided those with thoughts of rejection and wishes of future aggression. She avoided her parents, siblings and cousins aswell. She avoided her birth pack too late, however. Large, bulky, and with an ego that could not be compared, the dominant male came forward with the typical rage of a betrayed canine. His attack caused a further hate on the tyke for company, and she was left determined to the life of a loner. Alone, wounded, and weak, the youngster was not much of a win to groups of adults that came around. At times they left a piece of prey for Giselle to feed upon. Yet, after years of shame, the beast emerged from its hideout to seek the company of a pack once again.
YOU WANT MY OUTLINE DRAWN; OTHER CHARACTER INFO – Allegiance: Shadow wolf. Desired Pack: Nefendus. Power: Shadow manipulation and physical distortion. Psychic Abilities: Telepathy. Wings: No.
YOUR LIPS, YOUR LIES, YOUR LUST; CREDITS – Character: Me. Image: Shaishot on DeviantArt. Lyrics: The Feel Good Drag by Anberlin Template: Swenet
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Post by Greenie on Dec 20, 2010 15:38:23 GMT -5
Only thing I can see is your appearance needs to be 100 words long, it's currently at 42 words [fur section of app], and your personality needs to be 150 words and it's at 128 right now. Once you lengthen those I can accept her ^-^
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